How to Recognize and Create an Unreliable Narrator
Trust Issues With the Narrator Character
In fiction, as in life, the unreliable narrator is a character who cannot be trusted. Either from ignorance or self-interest, this narrator speaks with a bias, makes mistakes, or even lies. Part of the pleasure and challenge of these first-person stories is working out the truth and understanding why the narrator is not straightforward. It is also a tool a writer uses to create an aura of authenticity in his work.
The term originates from Wayne C. Booth’s 1961 "Rhetoric of Fiction," and though it is a key component of modernism, unreliable narratives are found in classics like "Wuthering Heights," in both Lockwood and Nelly Dean, and Jonathan Swift's "Gulliver's Travels."
The Unintentionally Unreliable
Many stories presented in the first-person point of view are told by a child or outsider who believes he is telling the complete truth but who, the reader quickly learns, is not fully aware of the circumstances around them. This is the case, for example, with the protagonist of J.D. Salinger's "The Catcher in the Rye," as well as young narrators such as Scout in Harper Lee's "To Kill a Mockingbird."
The unintentionally unreliable narrator invites the reader to think beyond the writing and to become an adult observer. What is really going on in Holden Caulfield's life? Is he truly the only "non-phony" in a world of liars?
What is Scout really seeing when she describes the behavior of her teachers, classmates, and father? This device gives the reader insight and perspective into the character who is the narrator.
The Intentionally Unreliable
While unintentionally unreliable narrators can be endearing and naive, intentionally unreliable narrators are often frightening.
Typically, such characters have sinister motives, ranging from guilt, as in the case of Nabokov's "Lolita," to insanity, as in the case of Edgar Allen Poe's short story "The Tell-Tale Heart."
Some of the most interesting uses of an intentionally unreliable narrator are in the mystery genre. Why might the narrator of a mystery story be intentionally unreliable? Most likely because he or she has something to hide. Such stories are especially intriguing because, when they are well done, the reader is completely unaware of the narrator's true character.
Creating an Unreliable Narrator
The purpose of an unreliable narrator is for you to create a work of fiction with multiple layers in which there are competing levels of truth.
Sometimes the narrator's unreliability is made immediately evident. For instance, a story may open with the narrator making a plainly false or delusional claim or admitting to being severely mentally ill. A more dramatic use of the device delays the revelation until near the story's end. Such a twist ending forces readers to reconsider their point of view and experience of the story.
For this writing mechanism to be effective, the reader must be able to discern more than one level of truth.
While your narrator might be an unreliable source of information for the reader, it is absolutely essential that you, the writer, understand and eventually reveal the reality behind the misleading words. It is essential that the reader can recognize not only the narrator's unreliability but also the reality that is being hidden.